Clock and Bed

The clock ticks so loud,

a constant rhythm in my dream,

My bed is a cloud that sails far supreme.


The clock turns in to a sun

I’m still in my bed

Wake up, Wake up! the clock hits my head.

Time wants me to go

But the bed says no

Fight for my love continues between those two.

I stopped their fight,

And promised my bed

That I’ll come back tonight.

Bed, pillow, clock and the whole mess of this image belongs to me.
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Published by Bala

I'm a technology enthusiast who not just consume but loves building products that enrich people's life. In this blog, I write about product management, technology, leadership, and stuff that I think is useful for the readers.

13 Comments

  1. Indira's avatar Indira says:
    July 28, 2012 at 2:06 am

    Very well written .

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    1. Bala's avatar Balu says:
      July 28, 2012 at 8:47 am

      Thank you.

      Reply
  2. vandysnape's avatar vandysnape says:
    July 30, 2012 at 1:29 pm

    Awesome Balu 🙂 Great Poem !

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    1. Bala's avatar Balu says:
      July 30, 2012 at 6:51 pm

      Thanks Vandhana 🙂

      Reply
  3. globalunison's avatar globalunison says:
    August 14, 2012 at 9:02 pm

    Such a cute poem with wonderful rhyme scheme!! Your creativity is commendable!! 🙂
    Stay blessed,
    -Naima.

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    1. Bala's avatar Balu says:
      August 14, 2012 at 9:17 pm

      Really? :S 😀

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      1. globalunison's avatar globalunison says:
        August 14, 2012 at 9:17 pm

        Yeah, it is – I loved it 🙂
        -Naima.

      2. Bala's avatar Balu says:
        August 14, 2012 at 9:20 pm

        Thank you Poet 🙂

      3. globalunison's avatar globalunison says:
        August 14, 2012 at 9:24 pm

        So are you, I never knew ya could follow up with such a great rhythm!
        -Naima.

      4. Bala's avatar Balu says:
        August 14, 2012 at 9:27 pm

        You make feel shy 😀 with your comments. thanks naima..

  4. shruthi007's avatar shruthi007 says:
    December 17, 2012 at 9:50 pm

    this one is awsome 😀

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    1. Bala's avatar Balu says:
      December 17, 2012 at 9:53 pm

      Thanks shruthi for stopping by my blog and for your awesome comments 🙂

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      1. shruthi007's avatar shruthi007 says:
        December 17, 2012 at 9:53 pm

        pleasure is mine 🙂

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