Clock and Bed

The clock ticks so loud,

a constant rhythm in my dream,

My bed is a cloud that sails far supreme.


The clock turns in to a sun

I’m still in my bed

Wake up, Wake up! the clock hits my head.

Time wants me to go

But the bed says no

Fight for my love continues between those two.

I stopped their fight,

And promised my bed

That I’ll come back tonight.

Bed, pillow, clock and the whole mess of this image belongs to me.

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  One thought on “Clock and Bed

  1. July 28, 2012 at 2:06 am

    Very well written .

    • July 28, 2012 at 8:47 am

      Thank you.

  2. July 30, 2012 at 1:29 pm

    Awesome Balu 🙂 Great Poem !

    • July 30, 2012 at 6:51 pm

      Thanks Vandhana 🙂

  3. August 14, 2012 at 9:02 pm

    Such a cute poem with wonderful rhyme scheme!! Your creativity is commendable!! 🙂
    Stay blessed,
    -Naima.

    • August 14, 2012 at 9:17 pm

      Really? :S 😀

      • August 14, 2012 at 9:17 pm

        Yeah, it is – I loved it 🙂
        -Naima.

      • August 14, 2012 at 9:20 pm

        Thank you Poet 🙂

      • August 14, 2012 at 9:24 pm

        So are you, I never knew ya could follow up with such a great rhythm!
        -Naima.

      • August 14, 2012 at 9:27 pm

        You make feel shy 😀 with your comments. thanks naima..

  4. December 17, 2012 at 9:50 pm

    this one is awsome 😀

    • December 17, 2012 at 9:53 pm

      Thanks shruthi for stopping by my blog and for your awesome comments 🙂

      • December 17, 2012 at 9:53 pm

        pleasure is mine 🙂

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